I have discovered that I have an entire day missing in the first draft of WITB. Friday night melts seamlessly into Saturday night iwth nary a thought to what’s going on in the meantime. I can’t just combine Friday night and Saturday night or Saturday night and Sunday night for a variety of reasons. I need that time span to allow things to work properly.
So, where’d Saturday go? This is a real problem for the timing of certain events. Oh well, back to Holly’s Create a Plot Clinic for some ideas. I have some time to work on this today, since I’m still down in the back.
It’s bad this time. I have a call in to the doctor to see if I can get some drugs. When I start hollering for drugs, you know it’s bad. But silver lining and all that. I’m making great progress on this first revision.